First Iteration Pitch: “My story is a (genre)__Sci-fi _______ called (title) ____The Broken Melody _____________about (hero)_________a boy and his sister_ ______ who wants _____to find his sisters’ blanket and save her_ __________________(goal) despite _____the many obstacles _______(obstacle).” Second Iteration Pitch: Our story is a fantasy story called Keystone City of Doors, about Alex who wants to get home, despite having to find parts of very old stone key, guarded jealously by a monster.
CHARACTERS:
Dad (age 5, lumberjack looking,
greyish hair)
Brother (age 2, gapped teeth, brown hair, green eyes)
Sister (age 5, really long hair, purple eyes, blonde hair)
Mawkeiya (age 752, half stone, witch looking)
Storyteller (age 1,245,983, pixie cut, brown hair, no eyes Souls (different ages, yellow)
WORLD SETTING: Switzerland, 1848 - 6 scenes/levels - The user takes on the role of the brother Settings and User Goals Per Scene/Level:
Scene/Level 1 = LightHouse - User Goal: Build Boat
Scene/Level 2 = Ocean - User Goal: Battle Seamonsters
Scene/Level 3 = Island - User Goal: Defeat monsters and find huts
Scene/Level 4 = Waterwell - User Goal: Swim to bottom of well and find XP
Scene/Level 5 = Witches place - User Goal: Defeat Witch
Scene/Level 6 = Rock - User Goals: swim to find the blanket