ORIGINAL CONCEPT
The story is about a brother and sister who live in a lighthouse. Their mother was a creature who married their father, but she died. The daughter is half creature and relies on a blanket to keep her alive, and when the dad throws it away, the brother and sister have to go on an adventure to find it and save her.
Lizard Woman Character Inspiration
Characters:
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Yaya: Age 11​
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Lizard friend: Immortal
(Protector of the light witches of her family)
Lizard Witch
Character Design
"Secret World" Environment Design
First Iteration Pitch: “My story is a (genre)__Sci-fi _______ called (title) ____The Broken Melody _____________about (hero)_________a boy and his sister_ ______ who wants _____to find his sisters’ blanket and save her_ __________________(goal) despite _____the many obstacles _______(obstacle).” Second Iteration Pitch: Our story is a fantasy story called Keystone City of Doors, about Alex who wants to get home, despite having to find parts of very old stone key, guarded jealously by a monster.
CHARACTERS:
Dad (age 5, lumberjack looking,
greyish hair)
Brother (age 2, gapped teeth, brown hair, green eyes)
Sister (age 5, really long hair, purple eyes, blonde hair)
Mawkeiya (age 752, half stone, witch looking)
Storyteller (age 1,245,983, pixie cut, brown hair, no eyes Souls (different ages, yellow)
WORLD SETTING: Switzerland, 1848 - 6 scenes/levels - The user takes on the role of the brother Settings and User Goals Per Scene/Level:
Scene/Level 1 = LightHouse - User Goal: Build Boat
Scene/Level 2 = Ocean - User Goal: Battle Seamonsters
Scene/Level 3 = Island - User Goal: Defeat monsters and find huts
Scene/Level 4 = Waterwell - User Goal: Swim to bottom of well and find XP
Scene/Level 5 = Witches place - User Goal: Defeat Witch
Scene/Level 6 = Rock - User Goals: swim to find the blanket
The story is about a young girl who has a necklace that has a necklace that has been passed powers, but she doesn’t know that. She lives in an apartment with her dad and pet lizard, but one day the lizard makes her necklace dirty so she has to take it off. When she does a lizard woman sneaks into her home and steals her necklace, just in time for the girl to catch her. So she and the lizard chase after her and end up transported to a magical world, with the goal to get her necklace back.
Revised Concept
